Existential and yearning, evidential and learning, detrimental and burning, ribbon of love and turning, braken the broken and curving, slacken the gun and weilding, fires so fast, never, regarding, you, mistake, life for life, from bone to ash, smelted, to justice nigh, crimez of defeat, semi-surreal, yet existential crisis, is blooming, from soil, to high sky, at noon, withered, from the heat, tired, of the run, nowhere left to run.

Would make great lyrics. Second to the last line not necessary IMHO.
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Thank you. I hadn’t considered this as lyrics but will try and write some chords or something for them! Also appreciate the feedback! 😀
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You’re welcome, my pleasure. 🙂
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